Never mentioned I went to massage therapy school back in 2008 hahahahahahha

Nice piece, Fia.

Daniel

Pre cum glistens from an engorged glans…… waits excitedly for your hands.

Cleverly penned, Fia. Sexy and witty a lethal combination. lol. Incredible write my friend. I got nothing, I’m drawing a blank for the dare. Appreciate you.

Damian

Naughty, Naughty, Naughty. HOT! Great piece my friend.

The anticipation of your smooth creamy touch
Sends shivers down my spine to the crack of my butt,
Causing the sensations throughout my body to be too much
Now my flesh is yours to devour it like lunch

Thank you, Will. It was fun to write.;))

Cleverly penned, Fia. Amazing writing my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello beautiful Fia no poetry is not dead it lives inside us beautiful 💕

So long as poet souls live, poetry will never die. How else would there be song?

Everything lives, dies and at times becomes resurrected. Great piece Fia.

Your a great storyteller Fia. Nice work!!

Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your writing shines. Excellent as always!

Woow ❣️❤️‍🔥

I mean, it’s a good question right?! Glad you enjoyed, thank you.

xx
~P.G💋

HJ it is always such a pleasure having you in my comment section. So glad you got a good feel 😉 xx

Mission accomplished! ❤️
xx

Passionately penned, P.G. Might I add while it did got hot in here, that this is also a very clever write my friend. Love breaking the 4th wall much? lol. That was really cool actually giving the reader a role inside the fantasy, by the way it occurs to me if you didn’t intend it that way and were somehow unaware, that I might have just opened Pandora’s box. I’m going with you intended it that way. Fantastic spill. Appreciate you.

Damian

Erotica with humor woven into it hehe 😜 I like that! Bravo!

Daniel

I am not late to this party just late in commenting. lol
Woman! Omg fire is not the word, more like a sticky inferno of sexual domination. Love it.

Playing with fire burns,
As these hot lines playing with us.

Shh..I’ve got the keys. But not now.

Well played out erotic scene. Loved how the anticipation bult as the story unfolded. And loved the playful reactions you had as he orchestrated your pleasure.

John