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Read MoreWhen days are punctuated with a swirl of a penAnd breaths are held waitingfor the moment that thoughtand reality becomes one Somewhere in my twilight mindWords were written and sentOn wings translucent and etherealSummoning you to me You never answerAs I...
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I agree with you, thank you
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Sometimes it feels like certain people are drawn into your life for different reasons, not always for communication or connection, but for maybe even deeper philosophical meanings than even those can provide (I recommend all the Stoics, of course) It always pays to patient…and observant. Good form and thoughtfulness.
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Thank you and yes certain people are drawn into your life for different reasons.;))
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Always dig your musings my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you ;))
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A very striking and succinct piece. A fire burns in these verses.
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Thank you, James;))
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Your writing always conveys your emotions very precisely, emotionally. I mean this: many thanks for sharing what appear to be deep, deep feelings. Can only hope that time will lessen the pain felt as soon as can, Fia.
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Thank you emmagreen ;))
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Read MoreOkay, Renee, The next shot is the whiskey shot. And I’m telling you, I’m feeling the waves of danger rolling off him over here.” Elene said. Looking over her shoulder at him.“ Your feeling the waves?” I said, smiling...
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Sorry, it took me a bit to get to read this. Excellent storytelling my friend, you are truly amazing, cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for even reading my work. Never rush cuz, we are good
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Fia, this is series had my eyes held by the gravity of your dialogue that was as riveting as the Red Shoe Diaries tales. Just great story telling dialogue at it finest. And just love how you took me striaght into the biker character and the reporter’s dance of words with him that ended on that fabulous encounter. Great work here.Enjoyed much.
John
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Tim wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe man's face is leather-like,as time-worn as his stained overallsfrom years of farming. His degraded truck's radiatoris starving for water. He unscrews the radiator capwith callused hands andgrabs a thin handle to ared metal bucket struggling not to spill a...
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My dad had to work two jobs as a kid during the depression because his dad had died and he had to support his mom.
This is intense but also beautiful lyrically.
Reminds me of the film The Grapes of Wrath.The Joad family…”I’ll be there Ma, yeah, I’ll be there!”
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That’s where the idea came from. I read the book many years ago. Your dad was a courageous person. No wonder why you turned out so well. Thanks for the comment, J.
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I liked how you discussed this. Looking through one person’s point of view and I could see it.
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Thanks so much for your input Fia. I appreciate the comment.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. 🙂
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Read MoreHis looks - stunning - dashing,his muscles defined, eyes serene,his demeanor confident - he's smart...undeniably charismatic.Young woman's hearts thump thinking of him. They've come for a glimpse.For a moment of enchantment. He's a rock star who made the big time strumminga...
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it is American culture to glorify murderers and the good looking look at Ted Bundy the same response was given to him they are treated as stars so why not murder?
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It’s totally bizarre to me, crimsin. Thanks for the comment.
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I don’t understand it either. Surely we can be a little more discerning than famous (or infamous) and attractive.
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Agreed Green. Thanks for the comment.
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It’s not the cover that shows a good tale: it’s the way it makes the reader feel when he/she both puts down the book and – whether or not the contents are remembered
A best seller is not necessarily everyone’s choice!
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Thanks for the comment, emma. 🙂
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Read MoreJust a note.As a long time member of Writers Cafe, for a few days now I haven't been able to log in. And if I'm able to it's the result of a long wait. Unfortunately this doesn't surprise me....
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Thank you, Tim;))
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My pleasure, Fia.
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It does seem like other sites are less commini& more population. It’s unfortunate that another site seems to be fading. But we have our little neighborhood here
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Thanks for the comment, Willow.
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hi dearest Tim I;m happy to see you here I struggled when I switched over but I like it here❤
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It’s a good site, crimson. Thanks for the comment. 🙂
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WC got so frustrating. I was on there since 2008.
I tried a few sites now and decided. But as Willow put it…”a little neighborhood here”—and
I hope to be allowed to move in permanently.
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Yes, the streets here look pretty nice so far. It’s basically a new site so there may be a few glitches but otherwise, I hope more people from WC come over too.
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I have done a fair amount of cursing in my day, Fia.
But the muse turns a blind ear.
j.