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Read MoreIt's all for Ishtar, the sacrifice will soon be completeHe needs to find a virgin, for his Egyptian bloody feast He's gonna rip out her tongue, slice off her face, gouge out her eyesThe blood will continue to flowWhen it...
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Thank you Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. I see the festivities are in full swing for horror month. Amazing write per usual, you’re the Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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HAHA! Thanks man.
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Read MoreI asked her what his name was, then dropped the silver on the floor screaming itHis mother burst into a hysterical laugh, hoping that she was dreaming itI should had seen the resemblance, I should had been a better...
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Nope we have to keep others reading and enjoying, we want you entertained Lady. Thanks
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This is a magnificent addition to the Beowulf legend. Truly fine storytelling. You really wrote this elegantly and an in grand mythical style. This had me riveted to the screen as I read. I love ancient myth and this is a fine example of a modern writer expanding on a mythical theme.
John
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Thank you sir, we also like myths and legends. We hope to continue with writes such as these
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The shock of discovering you killed your own. That is a horrible way to find out. I like how you wove this tale.
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Think of Oedipus and the final realization after you impregnate you own mom, hahaha, life is mythology and visa versa at times. Thanks Lady
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One of our favorite pieces and movies and to put it in a different era the kids may read this, thank you Lady
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This is an awesomely told tale my friend. You have the story tellers gift for taking an ancient story and breathing into it a fresh perspective that is so invigorating to read. You engage the reader with suspense and then that explosive ending. I too thought of Oedipus when that ending came. A worthy addition to the myth.
John
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We really appreciate your reading and comment, much respect
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Read MoreAt times sprouted,Opened upPomegranates,Reminded meOf bosomed breasts.Trying their way out of the shirt.Like a caterpillar out of the cocoon.
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Like the caterpillar analogy.:))
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Thank you dear.
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Thank you a lot. 🙂 A good day for you. Hugs.
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Read MoreYellow Atrocity Screams In the depth of night,when all is silent,I can hear you scream.It’s a blood screamnot from a dream butthe reality of human atrocity.This sound is yellow,the shade often seen hiding in shadow,or imagined while listeningto a morose...
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This is so empowering. We need to stop this.
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Hi Curt. I know I left a review for this poem on WC, but the message is so important, I’m glad you shared it here too.
The imagery on this piece is haunting- The yellow scream is so vivid, almost synesthetic image that makes human atrocity feel terrifyingly alive.
The way sound, color, and darkness intertwine lingers long after reading.
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I do remember this. this line always gets me “He’s obsessed with her death, obsessed with her blood, obsessed with her demise,”
Good piece.