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    I complain.....

        **A Complaint to You**   I complain about you— about this life we are living now, about the way we drift through days without knowing how.   When you care, you must also give— for what is love if not the courage to live?   I complain about you again, for giving...

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    • My draft I see AI couldn’t express so well my emotional thoughts.

      I complain about you for the life
      Which we are seeing now
      When you care you also need to give

      I complain about you that you are giving much fun than freaking life which you are of with

      I complain now about you that your responsibility has risen with much sacrifice to give to make mom and dad to be a dad as like dad and mom care and sacrifice.

      I do because you are wasting a dollar for every second and you are not saving a dollar every second.

      I beg your pardon for seeing the life what we are going through I must say complaints to you about your self because we ended up with no control of mom and dad…..

      Jessy Jacob ❤️

    • Nice write. I like the continuation of reasons that you stacked in the stanzas. It works well. Solid writing.

      • Hi, thank you for your review. Your encouraging reply is great effort in making me a better writer.

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    Love Sonnet LXXXI

    Love Sonnet LXXXI   I watch the full moon rise outside my window, its beams slowly reflect across your naked skin.   You stir some, sigh, as my fingers caress gently patterns across your breasts. Yaraa, let me love you like the   gently rains of Springtime as it plays upon...

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  • April Poetry #5

    April 5 is just another day
    in a year already a fourth
    of its life gone. But this day
    has no song, unless you want
    to count the rhythm and noise
    of imperial bombs sent by
    the “shining light on top of
    the hill”, who has always promised
    the grave and the slave. April 5,
    just another day where they
    say all this hor…Read More

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    • I was thinking this morning about that phrase march to the beat of your own drum. But the noise of the world is so loud these days it’s difficult to hear it. Those last lines…damn!

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    Leave a Message at the Tone...

    I can hear my phone buzzing  on the dresser across the room  like a fly...dogging my face it's distracting    as I give myself over ...in every possible sense... to his ferocious ministrations   his smoky eyes burning holes in my soul setting my nerve endings ablaze flickers spreading quickly a...

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