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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
You just can take your eyes of me
Also I live in peace
With myself
I am so happy that you keep me
Alive every day
Yes father you were there
When I went through hard times
Yes I had paid a high price
Father people say I am perfect
That is not me
I will never be perfect
Because I am human
And I make mistakes
I never can go back and…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Thank you very much
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Beautifully penned, Aldo. Amen, an excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank so much
For reading my poetry
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Thanks for reading
My poem
Have a nice day.
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To find love but the old face is stuck in stasis of despair and anger. Nice one
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Appreciate the comments. Thank you!
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Summarize me again, please, my friend!
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Thanks PAR
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If Hatred was a person it will hate this Haiku poem.
Well written bro! “)-
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Thank you M.E!
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The promising and positive title” sunny days ” creates an interesting contrast to the harsh and brutally realistic content of the poem. Very well written, dear Keith! xox
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Thank you Elke. Hope all is well. xoxx
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Always say yes to freedom. I like how this poem unfolded. Welcome To Stars Rite