This was touching to me. Tugged at my heart Fia.

There’s a lot of people feeling like this these days, Fia. I can relate.

Excellent write Fia …straight from your heart into mine.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write that gives me musing vibes my friend. You know how I dig your musings. Amazing work as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

This is very real. Truthful and strangely uplifting.
Regards
James

That last line is a stone dropping into the pond. Solid slap of reality. Doesn’t stop us reaching, does it?

Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write my friend. There is a longing in the words of this one. Nicely done.

Damian

There’s a sense of almost but not quite saying. A dance around the edges of something. Damian is right. There is a longing ringing through this one.

Hey Brandon!

There is longing but also a smidge of courage.
Letting someone watch you in real time falling is no joke.
Being vulnerable when it comes to longing isn’t easy.
Takes courage to put yourself out there.
I also enjoyed all the rhyming too.
It’s got meter and rhythm. Very nicely done!

hello dearest Brandon this is deep I understand the need to fulfill your fantasies in real time this is great ❤️