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There’s a sense of almost but not quite saying. A dance around the edges of something. Damian is right. There is a longing ringing through this one.
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I like both yours and Damian’s observations. I was playing with words with a longing vibe that day. I am glad you both can see that. Thank you for reading.
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Hey Brandon!
There is longing but also a smidge of courage.
Letting someone watch you in real time falling is no joke.
Being vulnerable when it comes to longing isn’t easy.
Takes courage to put yourself out there.
I also enjoyed all the rhyming too.
It’s got meter and rhythm. Very nicely done!-
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Thank you!
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hello dearest Brandon this is deep I understand the need to fulfill your fantasies in real time this is great ❤️
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Lots of darkness in this. It seems like an expression of an unhappiness that can’t even be found in dreams or fantasies leading to an ultimate end. Life is always a series of hills and valleys.
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Wow l can feel the darkness here. Great write
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I really like this.;)
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The energy you imbued into this piece is phenomenal. From the worn and dirty to the joyful dancing fresh. You took us there and we felt part of it. Of hope
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write my friend. There is a longing in the words of this one. Nicely done.
Damian