Crimsin

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May 15, 2025

They were married for a very long timeMinimal love for one anotherBoth daydreamed about the perfect crime. A poor swimmer she was at bestHe thought of submerging her deepAn expeditious agonizing death. He enjoyed her cooking and anything she madeShe thought...

11 Comments

M.E
1 year, 2 months ago

I have seen a slightly similar movie. I can’t remember which to put in the comment. Well penned!
Working on the right plan. Haha
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks man. Appreciate the comments.
DampKitten
1 year, 2 months ago

So, in the end, they took each other out. Irony.
In the series called “Ozark”, something similar happened between a husband and wife. They were both plotting to kill each other. He took a knife on their walk, but the arsenic she dropped in his coffee got him first.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Never watched Ozark. Sounds lovely. Thanks Dampkitten
- M.E
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  THANK You! I have been looking for where I have seen something similar. Ozark. What a good show!
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Yeah, Keith. You would totally appreciate the series, I guarantee it. Pretty captivating and intense.
Poetic Gawdess
1 year, 2 months ago

Moooorral of the story?? Trust no one, not even your spouse. Noted lol once again, you’ve blown my mind. Great work xx
~P.G💋
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Don’t trust anyone. Not even yourself! Thanks P.G. You rock!!!!
  - Poetic Gawdess
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Means a lot coming from you xx
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 2 months ago

Brilliantly penned, Keith. A real match made in hell my friend. Great storytelling. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks man. Appreciate it.

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