This is very good.

So well written. This is one of you best. and I remember the pencil writing years, so unsure what to keep and what to change.
It’s good to see and read you here.

Powerfully penned, Ellie. Into the book it belongs! This is an amazing write, thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

I would have been terrible with the ink and quill. I probably edit everything 5 times (maybe more) and then post and edit more. Nice touch with the
Mobius strip! Haven’t that in awhile! What ifs are horrible? I have deep regrets both of what I have and haven’t done. Doing stuff tomorrow is just…bullshit. Excuses. Excellent piece.

I love that closing stanza, I’ve often thought something similar, solidifying those feelings in ink can be haunting.
Great work.

You do have a way of keeping the reader in this series.

Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Always dig the depth and layers in your work my friend. I’m really digging this series as well. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks Mary for the comment.

It was as my old tshirt said

” Just another shitty day in paradise ”

😘