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    cry me a river

    acning love, blood spilled, emotions poolmy vulnerability exploited, makes me feel unlovedpeople are cruel I don't carebut when the one I love joins in I dietrust broken and crytoo different, I'm unloveable I guessstill hope plagues metelling me I...

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    • You are such a strong woman, Brenda. Many don’t hesitate to lash out and slash those wronging them. But you know the power of words. 🧡

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Words are weapons and writers know how to use them, showing restraint takes self discipline. Especially against those who provoke us. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I can absolutely relate to your poem, dear Crimsin. The strong wish not to hurt anybody makes sensitive people think that they have caused a conflict and are simply not lovable. Never forget that your loving heart and the power of your words are a most effective weapon and armor. Great work!

    • An eye for an eye brings no satisfaction, the loss still exist and nothing can replace it. Tight

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    trauma response

    crazy is a perspective and I've held it for most of my lifeabandoned at three my sharp little mind saw and remembers the precursorspeople always have a tell when their about to break your heartthe night the cops came...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. It’s amazing how the body reacts when our minds are being overwhelmed. Living with lasting scars isn’t always easy my friend. Very heartfelt write my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I can feel this one my friend. Strong write with all the colors and detail you’re so amazing at. Great piece Brenda.xo

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    hung jury

    wicked thoughts assault my covetyou are in deep with memy mind closes and my eyes openromantic intent cross examins my sexwhen I stand my ground in denialcommiting sexual purgerythe jury is out reviewing the porn of you and I...

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    esctacy

    intimate feeling you and me connectingthen fickle love fades and you break my trustwith a vengeance I come at youwe end up in bed fuckingit turns you on to see me so protectivejust as fragile as a flame in...

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    shift

    my personality shift and I felt the changegame, game i'm in my elementsinister desire don't betray mefelony of the heart I love more than youmouth hushed I say everything, while saying nothingit is a struggle to guard my tongueneedful...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. You can indeed learn a lot from observing I totally agree, and speak from experience. Happy New Year my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • If I were happy all the time, I would not be part of this world either. Very introspective piece. Happy New Year.

      • thank you graciously beautiful Fia for feeling me on this Happy New Year ❤️

    • Your words and message have so much more meaning then what we sometimes see on the surface. Here Brenda, you capture such truths and realities all into one poem. Exquisite!

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