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thank you lovely Fia I appreciate you ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian another underground poem I’m happy you enjoyed it ❤️
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Crimsin I love how you interwoven this with politics. “Should I die also so that you may live” that is deep
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thank you beautiful Fia politics is his favored place to be…your comment made me smile also humbling me ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write that gives me Robert Johnson vibes my friend. He is involved in everything especially politics and Hollywood. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian in my thoughts I always think I was at the rebellion and I had a choice then to leave with Lucifer of be born human to be tested and die…in my mind he comes around sometimes to mock my mortality…I always answer him the same that Hollywood and Politics are his favorite places to be…for the most part these distract him but there are times he acutally struggles with thoughts I appreciate your thoughts it does remind me of a meeting at the crossroads ❤️
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It’s the journey and the mystique of your vibes that always
keep this reader enthralledMuch respect
Naaj
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hello dearest Naajir I know you may not hear him from time to time but I believe you are aware of his motive of operations…I appreciate you getting the vibe here really I was unsure if anyone would… I feel so kooky writing these but I always have to follow my pen thank you graciously ❤️
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I don’t even know where to start with this one. There’s so much depth to it, and quiet emotion that unwinds in a shout. Incredible, Brenda 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow thank you for feeling the emotion here it is indeed deep….this goes back to before the angel rebellion we all there some of us chose to born human to be tested God didn’t ever want another conflict…Lucifer feels a lot of guilt but he travels with an entourage and distracts himself in politics and Hollywood…on my end is torment knowing deep down he regrets what he did…I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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I like this stanza “I’m cautious in my approach, with proper reverence given to the forces greater than I” I enjoyed this Crimsin
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hello lovely Fia thank you graciously I wasn’t sure how this would be received sometimes I get way out there lol ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A beautiful write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously my friend ❤️
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Read Moredecadent voyeur secreting yourself, in dreamshidden between nightmares and poppiessewing yourself into my realityforsaken ghoul, blotting out the lightwith whispers on the windsthe restless spirits watch youthen tell me your liesindiscreet monster, with the proclivity to dineinside you sorrow...
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thank you graciously dearrest Damian ❤️
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Imagination, makes for good books and paper scratching. Many of the great writers used pens with teeth that bit into the soul.
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hello dearerst Adagio my imagination can get me in trouble but I have to express myself the way the muse presents herself I hope no one takes it personal… thank you my friend for accepting this dark write ❤️
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Imagination is what made the ships that sail and the Odyssey.
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Your a talented writer Brenda! Such detail and precision. Great work here!! xoxxo
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thank you graciously dearest Keith ❤️you’re so kind to me my friend…
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Sisyphean Tasks and
Crimsin are now friends
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Some takes flight and others do die. Very interesting poem crimsin;)