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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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Drieks and
Backdeckbenny (Peter) are now friends
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Read MoreThis Wednesday with be the first of a series of classes in the Back-to-Basics group. The first class is on sonnets.This is for those who want to learn how to write one and for those who already written one...
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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interestin
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Read MoreKnock-knock, no need to open doors.Keep your seats warm while i traverse the floors.I’m your best friend when in need of comfort. Yet your worst enemy when you drift to slumber.Eeny, meeny, miny, moe. The time for games is...
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This is cool Drieks, I like the rhyming and the playfulness of it.
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Thank you Fia 🙏🏻
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hello dearest Drieks the time has come fiends of the host gather keening need aghast to see the reaper so soon the moon shines on your demise Happy Season may it be full of ghouls great write ❤️
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Thank you crimsin! 🎃❤️
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Nice write even though the Grim Reaper doesn’t frighten me.🙏
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👻
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It’s so fun looking at old material we’ve written.
5 years ago is a minute! HahahaStill a great read during Halloween.
It feels like something a group of teenagers would recite
at a Halloween party before all hell breaks loose!Enjoyed!
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Haha 100% agreed! Thank you Adelphina.
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Cleverly penned, Drieks. Excellent write my friend, I like the vibe of this one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! 🙏
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.