This is an interesting take on life. Who truly have control 24/7?

nah he mentioned somethin bout lookin at the parts of me I’m tryin to protect by callin everythin I crave fake. but I’m pretty sure he’s tellin his therapist…”jesus christ i should’ve became a podiatrist instead” after every session with me.

Powerfully penned, twofiftythree. This write has depth my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, twofiftythree. Been there a time or two. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

That kind of pressure and pain would be hard to deal with every day. Good spill

Kinda feels like a panic attack but slightly more subtle than those tend to be. Such strong feeling in this write. It’s evocative.

Great personification in this.
Feeling out of tune can feel stifling.

Aww. The way you feel about her as a sacred and heavenly is beautiful

Your beautiful and tender ode to la luna is much needed and appreciated by these weary eyes. To sit out late at night beneath her pallid light while the world goes on oblivious, is true poetic medicine. I praise your use of, welkin, something mystical about that word. Gorgeous write, my friend.

Clay