Powerfully penned, Drieks. Vivid imagery an incredible storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Remind me not to get in a car with you! Wow, it took me a hot minute to figure out what was happening. I love the rhyme you use – feels like an antagonistic relationship peaking with a bad turn. I like how you explore the moment of death, the voiceless reality of finality… except, I can hear you.

Love the flow and vibes. Great ink

Yes ma’am 🫡 haha

A hypnotic journey into delusions and visions of madness. You’ve left me strapped up in a straitjacket.

A poem of life, death, and time. Well done, Damian!

It sadly resonates with me…in the form of soul searching, in the process of healing.
Great write Damian ⚘️

This really hits so many issues in just one short poem. For some reason it brings to mind the insane deportations…families torn apart. Probably because that’s my fear, my daughter…Muse on, my friend. I’m here for it

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, back.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Being an alcoholic who no longer partakes, I’ll say the biggest thing I’ve learned is how many people I hurt. When I was consumed by the disease, I couldn’t see that. I rationalized I was only hurting myself, that’s how hollow I had become. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wise words blended into a tight rhyming poem. You’re good at this stuff!

A philosophical and strong poem. Well done.