A poem of life, death, and time. Well done, Damian!

It sadly resonates with me…in the form of soul searching, in the process of healing.
Great write Damian ⚘️

This really hits so many issues in just one short poem. For some reason it brings to mind the insane deportations…families torn apart. Probably because that’s my fear, my daughter…Muse on, my friend. I’m here for it

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, back.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Being an alcoholic who no longer partakes, I’ll say the biggest thing I’ve learned is how many people I hurt. When I was consumed by the disease, I couldn’t see that. I rationalized I was only hurting myself, that’s how hollow I had become. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wise words blended into a tight rhyming poem. You’re good at this stuff!

A philosophical and strong poem. Well done.

It’s never the heart that gets broken, just the mind.It never returns to its former self but wabi-sabi.

Nice Ode to Cohen. I’m a fan of his work. I even have a recording of me reading “Democracy” Dig this. Appreciate you .

Damian

Hauntingly?!?…. I like this word… now I have to write a story about that

OMG, I had never heard that song either until that competition. I wrote something for it too, but it sucked. Thank God you came to get me, Sam. You do realize that I’m not wearing a damn thing under this raincoat, right?

Make me rain, Sam

Saying that this gave me goosebumps would be the understatement of the year, Sam.

This was beautiful in such a devastating way..
Well done.
Xoxo,
~P.G💋