Phenomenal! What a delicious and erotic piece. WOW! Excellent work P.G xo

Girl this is your first attempt? You kept me engaged and that is not easy to do. Bravo

Adira, I appreciate you! Thank you! I was so nervous about posting it. xx
~P.G💋

I have several others.. but this one is the only one I’ve actually finished. But now I’ll definitely publish more. 🙂 xx

Beautifully penned, P.G. I concur with everyone above, nicely done. Really good for a first try. Appreciate you.

Damian

H-J you are too kind. Thank you for reading and for your kind comment!

xx
~P.G💋

I remember that moment. And yeah, it is such a lose to the music industry with Eddie gone. It reminds me of something Doyle from the Misfits said. Something like the music industry is the only industry where people can’t get along to make millions of dollars.

Great ink

Great piece of writing Damian. Never enjoyed VH’s music. DLR or Sammy Hagar. It doesn’t matter to me. What does matter is this piece you wrote. Deep, intriguing and full of some fun facts. Backstage is one great idea my friend.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you liked the story my friend. Memories, are something I have in abundance. There will be more. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the story my friend. Loved “Me Wise Magic” and “Can’t Get This Stuff No More.” were both great songs. Mike was always the anchor on backing vocals. DLR, often referred to him as the, Art Garfunkel, of the band. lol. Ed, went through a rough time for sure with addiction. Like you said he did clean up though, and turned his life around. They were great with, Hagar. But I’ll always be a Roth guy. I loved them both as solo artists as well. Actually I sometimes prefer Sammy on his own. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’ve heard both incarnations of Van Halen. I’m a DLR era girl myself. Different energy. Oddly enough, I enjoyed Hagar solo better than in Van Halen. I could never quite reconcile that innocent boy face on Eddie with the incredible fucking skill he blasted out of his guitar. Damn. Those were good days & great tunes. Thank you for taking us back, my friend

Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a great musing, always dig the musings my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Damian. 😊
Chocolate wine strokes again. My friend

Those hands should go to jail!!

I think we all hope to be remembered by those we interact with. Maybe keep a part of us alive. Great ink

Great! Last line brings it home. Nice work Fia..xo

Thank you, Hamid. I appreciate you saying that;))

Forgotten memories that echo, washed away in the dark froth, staring. Fia, this poem is almost like what I write hahahaha. It short, the imagery, delivers a quick punch 👊 👏 the way poetry should be! Bravo!