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Read MoreIn bare treesI’ve lost somethingto grey winds passingto thoughts that should havelingered longerbut they drifted bylike leaves downstreaminto the mistThe grass bendsin the lifeless fieldI call meand I go onfor more seasonsthan I can stand.
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Thank you, Crimsin. 🙂
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This has me thinking about my dad. This is very good Tim, I like this alot
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Thanks, Fia. 🙂
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On point, Tim. I love the reflective nature of this. It has powerful meaning on its own, as a read for us too.
My father died slow, and quite aware of it all, til the end. I was his friend more than his son. But it was crushing just as much.
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Thank you Styx. You’re lucky, my father didn’t know who I was in the end. He thought I was a hospital worker being he was in and out of there so much. He may have known on the last night, but I’ll never know for sure.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. This one pulls at the heartstrings. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for your thoughts, Damian.
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Tim, I felt this in the marrow of my bones deep in a place I haven’t visited in so long. Truly a deeply felt poem with a melancholy beauty that was perfect for this night’s reading.
John
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I appreciate you taking the time, John. Thanks.
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This captures the way memory frays at the edges. A tender, aching piece.
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Thanks so much for the comment, Curly.
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Read MoreMore Than Just A Contented Man Dear lord, I want you in the sauna, slippery salty and wet with your hair matted and several shades darker .. Clinging to your shoulders and your back like sun shy ivy crawling over church walls .. Dear lord, if only I could...
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I can feel the sincerity in this.
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I meant every word .. thanks Fia .. Neville 😎🌻👍
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Many thanks indeed Crimsin .. Have a lovely Sunday wherever you are .. Neville 😎💛🌻👍
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Many thanks kind sir .. muchly appreciated .. Neville 😎👍
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I like this and I wholehearted agree that one must face their Karma. No running from it.
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Happy morning, Lady Fia 🌤️
Thank you for looking at this rather sombre little composition on self-observation and responsibility.
If anyone, I knew it would be You who would grasp its true essence.Hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌️
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this is another great Richard..
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With a sincere thank you, Sam,
I appreciate your graciously generous comment and the time taken to read this humble poetic effort.Many blessings, Fellow Poet! ⁓ Richard🖌️
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Powerfully penned, Richard. Excellent write my friend. Accountability catches up to everyone at some point. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you most gratefully, Damian 🙏
Your praise and understanding wisdom of this humble piece, along with encouragingly expressed appreciation, are among those gifts that inspire me to keep writing.
Many Springtime blessings, Syr Poet! ⁓ Richard🖌
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wow this sounds like a relationship and how you feel within yourself in it great write ❤️