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Read MoreIn the cellar,green‑glass vessels lean one against another, their shoulders dust‑padded, throats sealed tight. Some wait decades,stoppered against the tremor of handsthat might one day twist them open. Others burst early,foam rushing into the...
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Aye. And possibly fodder for a next poem or two. 🙏🏻🕊️
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Aye. And possibly fodder for a next poem or two. 🙏🏻🕊️
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Your take is brilliant and most definitely part of the scope of the poem. Thanks so much 🙏🕊️
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Powerfully penned, kesner. Amazing write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the warm welcome, Damian. 🕊️🙏
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Life is one of choice: perhaps be briefly advised but – more importantly take a small and slow sip. Pause, freshen thought. Another sip or two perhaps, decide as to what lingers: your apprectiation or distaste.
The only problem is over-imbibing and losing any sense of good taste!
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So true! Thanks, emmagreen 🕊️🙏
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I’ve spent the vast majority of my life as an entertainer; even during my four years in the US Air Force, I did a short tour of European air bases as part of a “Tops in Blue” show featuring talent chosen from competitions at air bases throughout Europe. It lasted just a few weeks, but I was also active in the base theater group and acted in…Read More
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It looks like I was successful — to a degree. Fia granted me a Spoken Word group to run. Now I have to figure out how to do it. I need other people who want to be active in Spoken Word to join to post their work there, discuss their work and that of others and do anything they can to promote our work.
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
GOODNESS, TFT!
Now, THAT is a proper Sonnet … it’s obvious you’ve done your homework.
Your creativity sparks, emotion sings, and diction dances. And, I like your use of elision. Could use a bit’a punctuation.
See critique and edits below:I said I don’t do THIS. POems that behave (STRESS-STRESS / a count long)
that count their beats and…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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V3L4 should be: What’s next, a ballad? Maybe, one or two.
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much appreciated. good luck convincin me to use punctuation 😉
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Now, Syr Bard
Post it so everyone can enjoy your amazing flexibility and creativity with a poet’s pen.
I’ll be first in line to review it for you! ⁓ Richard
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