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Hi Richard,
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oops didn’t mean to send that too short of a reply. I read your paper? instructions about the nature of and what constitutes a formally written English Sonnet. I am afraid I have only ever attempted one. If I can find it I will post in the “Back To Poetry Basics” group. This group was mented to me by Valuptas Whispers Unholy. and then I saw Fia’s…Read More
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C’mon, Curt, join-in. There’s nothing like taking advantage of an opportunity when it present itself, and it’s FREE! With your creative talents, it would be most thrilling to read your version of a proper Sonnet, and then you’ll know how from then on. : )
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NIIIIICCCCCCCEEEEEEEEE!
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Read MoreMissed Opportunity Back in the day... She first saw him at the mall buying clothes. He noticed her the first day of school. She liked his hair and smile. He thought, she doesn't hang in cliques...cool! Smart and pretty! They were both...
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Tragic. Well written, nicely done!
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Read MoreHIT BY A TRUCK(This is Joe's true story. 11/4/11.)He left work at rush hour. He had tocash his paycheck and get home. They needed food and diapers. Money was tight. He couldn't afford a car. He walked.Down the street...
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The world is filled with Joe’s and Joelines.
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I knew him and his wife 2 years before his accident and I just recently ran into him and we caught up. Where are the happy endings? I’m not seeing them. Everyone has a rough time, now.
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Read MoreIt was on a sultry Sunday.after almost45 minutesof passionate delaythe towerwhich swayed to and froby ropesfinally sat atop the church erect. You thought Imeant somethingelse didn't you?
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Great twist.
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:))))))))) Thanks.
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I thought you were standing at attention funny dearest Tim ❤️
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I’m quite capable of it. :))) Thank you crimsin.
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Cleverly penned, Tim. A very witty write my friend. Dig this. Appreciate you.
Damian
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🙂 thanks Damian.
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Well if you’re going to use the big E-word like that! We’re going to think the obvious. LOL
And then you put us on the guilt trip of sin once we realize it’s about a steeple of a church! You are sinister.-
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hahahaha, I gotcha didn’t I. lol Thanks Styx.
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Ironically, I was thinking of a write about sinners under the shadow of a (large) cross. I’m not sure about the religious aspect or not, just the idea of mankind doing what we do under that perceived shadow.
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Sounds interesting. I’ll be reading it if you write it.
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Nope. That’s exactly what I thought you were talking about haha.
Great ink friend
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lol Thanks, Nick. 🙂
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Tim this was such a fantastic surprise. lol Well written indeed. And indeed it was quite a surprise.
John
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Hi, Redzone! I welcome you to “BACK TO POETRY BASICS” and would like to invite you to join-in on our Sonnet lesson (below). It’s easy: just read and follow along. I look forward to sharing with you. ⁓ Richard🖌