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Harriet-Jacqui xx posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Blue Pool
A young man sipped limoncello, in a bar in the village square,
He was lonely and heartbroken, you would often find him there,
His heart was filled with sorrow, he felt twisted and torn inside,
When a waitress in a black dress, came and whispered as he cried,
‘Do you know there’s a blue pool, born out of the mountain str…Read More![]()
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Better safe than sorry, so no sorries, please! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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![Profile picture of Brandon Houser]()
This was touching to me. Tugged at my heart Fia.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you Brandon:))
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
There’s a lot of people feeling like this these days, Fia. I can relate.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Yes, there are. Thank you Tim:))
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Excellent write Fia …straight from your heart into mine.
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Thank you Peter;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write that gives me musing vibes my friend. You know how I dig your musings. Amazing work as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Yes definitely a musing vibe cuz. Thank you Damian 😊
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![Profile picture of Knight]()
This is very real. Truthful and strangely uplifting.
Regards
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Thank you, Knight;))
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That last line is a stone dropping into the pond. Solid slap of reality. Doesn’t stop us reaching, does it?
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
No it doesn’t. We keep going. Thank you Willow 😊
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Read MoreI salvaged the happiest photo todayIt lays crippled at best insideA promising vision If you’d like to see then…My skull only needs to be cracked open! How despicable it is To frame miseryEncase these torturous momentsDetain it to eyes of...
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Lots of darkness in this. It seems like an expression of an unhappiness that can’t even be found in dreams or fantasies leading to an ultimate end. Life is always a series of hills and valleys.
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Wow l can feel the darkness here. Great write
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Lizz wrote a new post
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Read MoreI was always told, You never know someone, Until you share a roof, a life laid bare. He was the sun, a charming, loving glow, A man I worshipped, beyond compare. But shadows lengthen, darkness takes its hold, The man I knew is now...
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Life is not always the way one envisions it.
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![Profile picture of Lizz]()
That is so true.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Lizz. A very heavy write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you 😊
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Being trapped and alone with an abusive man must be agony. The only way out is to GET OUT. That kind of isolation and fear needs to be reported.
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Iv tried Neither of those worked because he never left bruises. People seem to think that it’s easy to get out of iv tried to leave and was stupid enough to come back.
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There’s no where you can go? Parents house? Brother or sister’s house? Sucks. You can’t live that way.
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Nope I don’t talk to much of my brothers and I think I let my closest brother down and what he done for my it put his life on the line so now because of that I’m already getting ready to leave and now summer is coming I don’t mind being on the street for a while.
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While I fancy myself a romantic, I think I will avoid this Blue Pool. I have loved a few times and may never love again, but I think I do not want to play the fool. Her pool is enticing, her lips warm with arousal, but dear lady, I will remain on this stool. Sorry HJx, I hope you don’t mind where my mind went as I read your poem. -Curt