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Read MoreThey were married for a very long timeMinimal love for one anotherBoth daydreamed about the perfect crime. A poor swimmer she was at bestHe thought of submerging her deepAn expeditious agonizing death. He enjoyed her cooking and anything she madeShe thought...
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Thanks man. Appreciate the comments.
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So, in the end, they took each other out. Irony.
In the series called “Ozark”, something similar happened between a husband and wife. They were both plotting to kill each other. He took a knife on their walk, but the arsenic she dropped in his coffee got him first.-
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Never watched Ozark. Sounds lovely. Thanks Dampkitten
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THANK You! I have been looking for where I have seen something similar. Ozark. What a good show!
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Yeah, Keith. You would totally appreciate the series, I guarantee it. Pretty captivating and intense.
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Moooorral of the story?? Trust no one, not even your spouse. Noted lol once again, you’ve blown my mind. Great work xx
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Don’t trust anyone. Not even yourself! Thanks P.G. You rock!!!!
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Means a lot coming from you xx
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Brilliantly penned, Keith. A real match made in hell my friend. Great storytelling. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man. Appreciate it.
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Read MoreSorry... I don't know how to cry How do they do it? Those who can How do they not look like death afterwards Or a sad clown portrait character during? My eyes are dry and hurt so much I don't remember the last time Where...
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A gut-wrenching cry is therapeutic. Nice spill, Blue
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Logically I know tears are healthy but crying is such a rare thing for me it feels foreign. Hopefully I figure it out.
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Fia is right. You need to just let go of your feelings.
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Brilliantly penned, Blue. Incredible spill my friend. The imagery and wordplay are fantastic. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much. I appreciate you as well. I’m still figuring out the posting style of this website.
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A wonderful piece of poetry blue. Nicely executed.
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I have seen a slightly similar movie. I can’t remember which to put in the comment. Well penned!
Working on the right plan. Haha