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Just beautiful…
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hi Pete thanks for looking. Glad you liked❤️
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I don’t think they get any sweeter than you Damian. I appreciate you too.❤️
Jackie
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Intriguing work.
It feels as if it’s going somewhere beyond the cafe.
I enjoyed it.
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Hi James 🙂
Yeah, they have the new three word challenge 🙂 took me a minute to figure out how to do it like how to submit it lol glad you liked it. Always a pleasure to see you my friend.
Jackie ❤️
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I loved this so incredibly much my friend. The intensity of passion and her sorrow and then the stranger named compassion taking her in his heart just touched mine deeply. I am moved and touched.
John
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Yeah, they have the three world challenge here, John, so I thought I’d give it a try. I didn’t get any traction but that’s OK. I did enjoy how this came out too. Always a pleasure to see you on my page my friend. Love you, bro❤️
your sis, Jackie.❤️
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You brought up some amazing points in this. We are aĺ human, doing human things. Even our avoidance we are slightly similar. Like this poem very much.
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Thanks Fia….
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hello dearest Benny I wonder if we don’t manifest in more than one place…I like occupying a body but it is uncomfortable but it allows so much for us to interact with each other enjoy our surroundings and eat…someday our souls may return to spirit I don’t know this is deep 💕
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When we can finally let go of everything, including our ego, then we will be free.
Unfortunately, that usually requires the death of our body or a life time of training the mind…..lol
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Read MoreI'm not a girl who dreams to be romance Those moments are fleeting just like his glance Flowers are meant to live So, why do we cut them to give Everything is supposed to be removed from the stem Instead I get pricked and...
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Honest, yet not at all devoid of fun. 😉
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Thank you, Jim,))
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hello beautiful Fia I’ve been getting to know you reading you it’s clear you’re a powerful woman…I’m unsure what it is that makes you stronger than romance I know I obtain for personal reasons maybe I just don’t buy into it maybe you are the same great write 💕
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. You really been on a roll lately, incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. This means a lot to me
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Exquisite piece of poetry. Well written Fia.
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Thank you, Keith:))
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Sometimes it’s the right person at the wrong time. Great ink.
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Thank you, Nick:))
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BIG
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Thank you, Poet, xoxo
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Read MoreFueled by my disgust with lifeI desire to destroy and mutilateHumans in their purest formI stalk the impregnatedAt maternity storesAnd lust for their cargoThen I follow them homeAnd plot my terrorFast approaching their bedroom doorWith knife in handSmirking, I...
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Hey, you’re back. This reminds me of Dumplings on Netflix. A 2005 horror movie that I watched in the daytime. lol ( I am a scaredy cat. You know that.)
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Sheesh! That movie was disturbing. I first saw it on Three extremes and then its own movie.
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Thank you Fia. Appreciate the feedback.
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Bringing the thunder, Keith. Cannibal Corpse.. I know some Death Metal. lol. This write knows how to make an entrance my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes Cannibal Corpse artwork. It was fitting to add their imagery to my poem. Thanks Damian.
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An ‘Ouvre-Moi Ta Porte..Que Je T’Ouvre Le Ventre’ slightly like poem. It left my stomach churning.
Well done! And welcome back! “)
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Thank you for the kind words. Appreciated!
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Sort of back. More of a cameo appearance. Your a great person and a favorite poet of mine. Thank you for the feedback Adira. xo
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It’s for the three word competition. I hope I did it right thanks for looking Adira. Love you girl.❤️