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Read MoreYou sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...
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Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.
Thanks again for the kind feedback!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)
Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.
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Hot Erotica Star! xx
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Thank you my friend!
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You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreHello and welcome to Stars Rite News. There are a few updates I’d like to bring to your attention. First: Text-to-Speech OptionYou’ll notice a text-to-speech option when you post your work. You can now choose whether or not you want...
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Kickass! Great job with your constant evolution, Fia!
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Thank you so much, Betty
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Read MoreTonight, the storm was flying off the handle, her body hardening in my hands a bit of rigor would do you... Saying. "Mama, may I?" With the hip flask of her naked anatomy containing the formaldehyde of her evermore....
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Whew, chilling. The mind reacting to itself. Creative way to explore the tension between control and chaos, intimacy and decay. I’ve never been much of an introspective writer; at least I’ve never sat down and said I’m going to write in that way. And while your piece is indirectly introspective, given the abstract images, it does make me think. its the way you show a mind caught in strange, looping thoughts while trying to make meaning of overwhelming feelings. Anyway i’m rambling, this was short and sweet.
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Thank you, Kay. I don’t see the sense in writing if one is afraid of words. I wrote only because I enjoy it.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art
I love that no one needed to sing to get this music. she plays Metallica perfect on the piano
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You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.