Beautifully penned, Benjamin. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I can see why it was nominated. It has a dreamy and faraway quality to it.

I always think unicorn is code for a secret society this made me feel God himself was talking to me just beautiful…

I brow my spells
in leafy black-green
where sullen moons
sulk in pretty-pink

love it 💕

I was raised around poetry books, and my dad liked to dabble in it late at night. My oldest sister too, had books around, and hers were more what developed my tastes. Like this write of yours. It reminds me of old Dylan. I don’t know why. yet that’s a good thing to key my old memories of reading his stuff.
You sir, are a poet. Not just a writer. an actual poet. And that is a very good thing.

Been a while. Good to see your still weaving words and painting with phrase. 👍

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Clever word play. I especially like the transition:

“In moon river dreams, my limbs drifted
from pillow to ache within the attic”

Excellent write.

Thank you Joe. Isn’t it beautiful how music connects the world? Were all looking at the same moon river

What a well done, strong write. Poetry is so broad, so I look for what moves me, and makes me nod, with approval.
This succeeds quite well.

Cleverly penned, Ghosteen. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian