Ok “Porn of Butterflies?” That is funny.
that last stanza that he drowned in her was my favorite

Yes, on forming opinions on whom to hate…
this is intense, second stanza is a hard-to-read truth.

My mother lie dying…but I am pretty sure she was aware enough of what was going on around her…I wonder if she
wished everyone was not so sad? Lives need to be celebrated, and we often forget that when we are making arrangements after someone close passes on.
REally good write.
j.

It’s funny how judgment is passed so easily. Time is fleeting and we still do it. I hope you’re okay. Very well written