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    Challenge Are you up for it?

    Calling all those who fish  I have an idea that's delish  Can you write about the catch  Not the one that you threw back    I have a Twist in mind  Not all fish are one of a kind  The catch can be by sea or...

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    • this makes me think of metaphors for getting with someone romatically and going to the flea market and haggling for the write price haggling with a whore sorry Fia it’s the images your challenge brought 💕

      • It’s fine. Go for it and write crimsin

        • I cast desire upon the tide,
          My fingers tremble for her weight
          A secret urge I cannot hide,
          My bait a promise, sweet as fate.

          She rises shimmering, bare and bold,
          Her flanks and curve inflame the air
          Enticing as forbidden gold,
          She stirs my blood with fevered dare.

          She fights, resists, with sultry grace,
          Her finish slick against my skin;
          The pull, the yield, our swift embrace
          She swallows lust, I drink her in.

          On shore, still dripping wet with lust,
          Her form revealed, full-bodied, wild
          We meet as lovers, freed and flushed
          My catch, my craving, reconciled

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    Mirror of the World

    Mirror of the World  (Short Story) The smell of ripe fruit was in the air, when the wandering dervish entered the small village. On that hot summer day he was looking forward to a cooling drink of water from the common...

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    • This is sweet and insightful. If only people could see the reflection in the mirror. Do onto others as you would like them to do onto you. (I remember some school teaching)

      • Thank you very much for your kind comment dear Fía! You are rightn – living together in harmony could be so easy if we treated everyone the way we want to be treated ourselves.

    • Ich liebe es, Elke! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

      • Vielen Dank für deinen wundervollen Kommentar, Daniel. Support from a great writer like you means a lot to me!

    • Beautifully penned, Elke. You’re a gifted storyteller my friend, really enjoyed this. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Such a sweet and uplifting tale.
      You are a wonder with so many diverse styles.

    • Thank you very much for reading and writing such a lovely comment, my friend!

    • An excellent story, to remember.

    • I enjoy fables, folk tales, fantasy and the like, and so I enjoyed this quite a lot. I wish this dervish could visit all around the world and teach people to behave better.

    • Yes you are right, Sam! The earth could be a wonderful place, if we worked together and took good care of one another and the whole planet.
      Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

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    The Shape I'm In

    How much I missto moss in loveholding the moldto gorgon stonea lifetime ago, thisancient road.Horizons beammy wanderlust dream:I am dim  of years away  from the final dandelion blaze,still sleek from behindwith the Sun going down‘til morning lurksto hone the worm& I (...alone, at night, aloof...

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    • Beautifully penned, Benjamin. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I can see why it was nominated. It has a dreamy and faraway quality to it.

    • I always think unicorn is code for a secret society this made me feel God himself was talking to me just beautiful…

      I brow my spells
      in leafy black-green
      where sullen moons
      sulk in pretty-pink

      love it 💕

    • I was raised around poetry books, and my dad liked to dabble in it late at night. My oldest sister too, had books around, and hers were more what developed my tastes. Like this write of yours. It reminds me of old Dylan. I don’t know why. yet that’s a good thing to key my old memories of reading his stuff.
      You sir, are a poet. Not just a writer. an actual poet. And that is a very good thing.

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    Table Manners

                 “In the beginning everybody was eating and talking shitBut one of the girls attitude was taking it too far and would not quit,            “Everyone was naked and relaxed, but she would not calm downSlowly I made my way...

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