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    Distracted on the way to the scene

      You sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...

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    • You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.

      • Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.

        Thanks again for the kind feedback!

    • Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)

        Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.

    • Hot Erotica Star! xx

      • Thank you my friend!

        • You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx

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    the invitation

    tenderness vows to do no harmencourage a feeling and dance on the windssecretly craving your touchseduce the moment, I covetspeaking in tongues I whisper venomous versemeant to entice youmasochistic inclination, I think you like a commanding presencereverse the role,...

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    The Rain

    On monday it rained I walked to work in the rainOn tuesday it rained againI took the busOn wednesday I had the morning offI went to the cafe and watched the rainThursday rainFriday rain again On saturday I had the afternoon...

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    • Was it internal rain or was it seasonal rain? That is a lot of water all the time. It can be depressing. One day of sunshine and not even a full day at that. Good poem

    • It was English Rain. The winter has become soggy here instead of cold. Thanks for reading.
      Regards
      James

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    Greetings from the (W)alternate (You)niverse

      I thought it had been a surreal dream or some runaway fantasy A vivid hallucination of the psychosomatic kind But when a portal of blue light opened right in front of me It felt like a vortex from my cortex was compressing...

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    • Oh, what kind of adventure will he take you on? Now I am curious.

      • A couple of years ago, I did the NaPoWriMo challenge at DU with 30 stories. I was able to correct my “other” selves as well as learn about my other parallel universes. I escaped zombies, I fought nazis, heck, I even got lost in space, The imagination of an infinite number of multiverse knows no bounds, so who knows how many shenanigans I’ll get into this time. We’ll see

    • Phenomenally penned, Wally. Amazing write my friend and a nice start to the series. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • I was just mentioning to Fia that I did a 30 part series at DU a couple of years ago and it was a fun adventure (though I was under the time constraint of the challenge, 30 poems in 30 days). I may take on it again this year but I’ll see what I can come up with this time.

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    a little filth

    necromancer of filthreanimating the long deadcorrupt of visionshudder in understandingmy sexuality reaps your honestyyour need on the windsencite my lusts, they are of a wicked naturecunted truths for this culted groupieyou called the four corners and the woman of...

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