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Read MoreWhen I look in the mirror I see more graysAs if the days whizzed by a little too fastEvery wrinkle I see appearing on my faceFeel like secrets and information amassed Many reflections seem like they are distant viewsLike watching...
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Thank you Rosie. I think sometimes some folks have older souls, relating to others which gives us more depth and insight.
Welcome to Starsrite. Hope to read and see your work soon.-
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Thank you for the warm welcome.
Take your time. I look forward to it. x
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Thanks for reading and commenting Damian. We’ve been through a lot so we know we can endure.
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Thank you reading and commenting.
Capture those moments for posterity also helps us reflect inward, to make better decisions in the future.
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I regret not having read this, your latest dollop of smut, earlier, CS! HJx
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Haha!!! One of the realest testimonies [poems] I’ve ever read
Real talk on both ends [perspectives]
Dope shit and much neededMuch respect
Naaj
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We all have traveled that road of regret. And some are still on it with no off ramp.
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This has some unexpected twists and turns.
But it is indeed, a reality check for some.
If only she had fertility issues. It wouldn’t be a nightmare unfolding. x
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Twist and turns in the process of regret can lead to negativity.
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That’s true.
Some difficult circumstances to overcome.
I admire the originality of the piece. And how it is so realistic.
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I have lived it many times throughout my life. Now being older, wisdom has prevented me from making some of the same mistakes.
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That’s the best way.
Let some other fool be the victim.
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That’s a funny and truthful poem! Well written!! Thanks!
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One of those hard truths in life many learn.
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Yeah.. a lesson you have to experience to learn.. :^/
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Captivating, spiritual and unraveling.
A pleasure to read.
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thank you graciously Rosie and welcome ❤️
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hello dearest Naajir I’m sorry I missed your comment thank you graciously yes prayers ❤️
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Read MoreI'm dreaming today, floating through the daydiscovery in a smileyou conveyed your beauty to meand I can't stop myself, I feel the eurphoria of the momentsecrecy in an intimate thoughtI'm not sure you meant to tell mesexy man your...
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I like how you put in there I am not sure you meant to tell me because sometimes things slip and they were never meant to be said out loud. Lovely
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hello beautiful Fia thank you and yes they do sometimes with nothing more than a look ❤️
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eternally lovely, your poetry, HJx
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thank you graciously lovely poet ❤️
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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Simply sexy and classic
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thank you graciously dearest Naajir I feel bad I thought you all were ignoring me when I’ve been missing your comments thank you my friend ❤️
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Read MoreAnother spirt in a quagmire Selling off dignity just to get by Inflated egos that conspire Adding layers to a perpetual lie Sycophants always fall in line Empty vessels lacking a spine This world so full of sorrow Throwing obstacles in the way All I’m asking of...
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It is a bit musical. I wish for a better day, each and every day. That deer lost in headlights is so true
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. A lot of us do wish for better days, that’s for sure. It has a musical feel is on point, it pretty much demanded to be that way, I just followed along for the ride. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I agree.
Thank you for putting it into words so eloquently.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Got my foot tapping away from the off to the end and back again .. Nice one too sir . Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does have a bit of a rhythm. Thank you for your continued support kind sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how this feels angry and tenderly thought at the same time. I like that hopefulness in the dark
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brandon. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian the fire in the eyes of those zealous followers of the pied piper elevated to guru status is painted in your poem with fire and smoke. Truly a smoking great poem that is as strong emotionally as it is rhythmically. You have real talent my friend.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really loved the way you described the write in your eyes my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I don’t think I’ve seen subterfuge used in poetry before and you made it fit and feel perfect.
I think many of us are feeling the same way, especially with the way the world is going.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like using odd words or hardly used words from time to time. When I can make them fit of course. lol. The world is very fragile at the moment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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