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Thank you for confirming my thoughts by commenting on my writing.
You must be of ‘a certain age’ to understand.
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Wrinkles don’t kill the burn…that need still drives. Nicely done in so few words
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Read MoreVulnerable... My wax-like existence in the presence of your flame makes my eyes drip with tears. This constant bleeding of my soul... This neverending torment... My waxy soul will sometimes avoid the world's flame, and my running tears will dry. And my wax figure will be silent... tears dried...
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I think that open vulnerability is a great strength, in a similar vein to how admitting ignorance is actually a sign of great intelligence. It’s easy to melt when you feel more than most…,most people wish they could burn like you.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Another incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreShe turns her naked back to me.She is not rejecting me.She is inviting me in.She knows it.I know it.We begin the dance.Horizontally, but a dance nonetheless.My fingers stroke her skin and rummage through her tussled hair.They shift to her...
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And some that only think they can…. What a punch at the end. Nice weekend starter.
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Touching and being touched is natures way of saying….’ I understand ‘.
Doesn’t always require sex but good sex always requires it.
Thanks Raven for your comment 💋
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Read MoreDeath has a face of beauty, that not many can see....For in death our soul is set free.... Smile upon me, sweet face of death....And grasp my hand as I take my last breath.... I am ready gentle death, to walk...
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Death has its clock. It will not be rushed or pleaded with, but when it comes, you cannot escape its grasp. This piece was done nicely.
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Great write…. paraphrasing some other person….Death awakens us from the dream of life.
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We seek the same end but I choose Dylan Thomas’ “Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night” way of getting there. Good write 🌼
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If you can approach your death with this kind of dignity, then you will have won.
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Powerfully penned, SW. Speaking truth on this one my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Daniel, I love your stories; you do bring them to life.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling, amazing imagery my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Daniel this is magnificent. My eyes were riveted to the screen as your tale unfolded. A work of dark literary quality that was incredible to read. Truly a publishable story. Knowing this is just a chapter in your book amazes me. Truly fantastic story telling.
John
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Yes and yes, we do ache to be touched, we deserve to still be desired. Wholeheartedly agree, my gentle man.❤️