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Damian DeadLove and
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Read More...in the end.......there was nothing to forgive we came as a human dynamic...urgent as fuck..my dominant pressure...your consumer base...spread wide...i penetrated...you gave me that face time, baby i watched you...studied as you emanated...the hues of me ...the blues of me...the bruising of...
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Tourette’s syndrome strikes again, I guess. Haha
Gotta love poetry
Thanks for the energy on this vibe, FiaNaaj
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wow dearest Naajir this is hot organic sex and lust…I’m feeling the poem ❤️
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Glad you felt this…remembrance
Always appreciate your visits, Brenda
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Big thx, bro. This was a fun vibe to write
Much respect always
Naaj
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Haha. Very unique comment. Like your play on words
Thanks for dropping inNaaj
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The picture is bad ass! Then your words come rolling like thunder. I love the rhythm of this, especially. The word build is very, very clever, too. Top tier writing, Naajir. Powerful and entertaining. Memorable, actually.
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Big thx for dropping by, Styxian. This was one of those mood swings
that’s been stewing in the inkwell.Alway appreciate your energy
Much repect
Naaj
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Read MoreWhere the Magnolia Sings and My Mother Keeps the Moon in a Jar - Part TwoThe Shattered Glass The afternoon sun stretched lazily across the floorboards, casting long, warm rectangles of light over my Batman figures. The “Pow!” and “Zap!”...
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With age often comes wisdom and more appreciation for our past than may have originally been felt. I think the lesson in this was the appreciation for the women in his past life, his mother being the leader of them all, and the little lessons learned along the way.
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Your perspective here is right on target here my friend. As the writer I can truly say you have focused on the heart of this story and gleaned the meanings within. I am so deeply grateful to you for sharing your understanding and what you took from my words. Yes the mother is the leader of these women in his life. I think I read something a psychologist wrote along those lines long ago. You really understood exactly this theme and delved into this meaning most aptly. I thank you so much. 🙂
John
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No problem, John. Sorry it took so long. Been busy. 🙂
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My friend no problem about waiting. Never a problem. Very much appreciate you and your words here. 🙂
John
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Read MoreWhere the Magnolia Sings and My Mother Keeps the Moon in a Jar - Part One The air in New Orleans during the summer of 1973 didn’t just sit; it breathed. It was a heavy, velvet presence, smelling of damp...
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Rather the stick huh? A firm hand to keep in line. this is a good opening to this. this felt like I read two full pages here.
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Glad you liked my opening my friend. Indeed it was at least two pages. Yes the boy in the story liked bossy women who kept him in line. They excited him. Thank you so much for reading my friend. He is just discovering his submissive feelings. This is the beginning of his femdom interests.
John
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You have a really nice writing Style I’ve always enjoyed. I like the contrast between Sonia and the mother. In a world of wonderment, a little boy finds his first crush. It’s an ideal life of wonder and amazement. I believe if there was a hundred dollar bill in his pocket he would have given it to her. lol
The mother has wisdom enough to know where his feelings will be in years to come.
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I can’t thank you enough my friend. I am thrilled by your apt and keen observations on this story. Truly you have captured its essence in your review. I am deeply appreciative. Indeed love that comment if there was a hundred dollar bill in his pocket he would have given it to her. lol. Priceless. Indeed I am sure he would have given it to her. And yes truly the mother knew how his feelings would evolve and already were. Thank you so much. 🙂
John
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Crimson, your poem reads much of laden sadness and reluctance. Love sometimes becomes distorted and misrepresented in relationships when love, respect, integrity and honesty is not reciprocated.
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it’s true those are vital to a healthy relationship thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can sense a shattered emotional connection.
Decaying miserably, upon disrepair.
Healing is what matters the most going forward. x
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hello lovely Rosie it’s true but sometimes there is no healing I’m schizophrenic and as such I have always accepted less than… thank you for the love on this write ❤️
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thank you dearest Adagio for the love on this ❤️
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Well… the secret realm of just us. (you told the secret) This is really good.