Betty

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May 13, 2025

Here we are at the nighmare paradeafter hours you hear cries in the nightthe shadows fall as you witness ghosts of the midwayliving dolls steal your soulyou dare to ride the haunted carousel?calliope plays mysteriously in the foregroundthe circus...

10 Comments

Willow
1 year, 3 months ago

Damn, the last line is like a lid slamming down on a coffin after the rest of the poem. Actually a very valid reminder in this world
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thanks Willow. Appreciate the kind words.
Sappho (Elke)
1 year, 3 months ago

Wow, this is a wild ride you have taken us on with your poem! Your socially critical observation of this world is brilliantly penned and enjoyable sarcastic!
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Always sarcasm Sappho. Good to see you here.
Poetic Gawdess
1 year, 3 months ago

Oof! What a haunting vision you’ve painted us with mere words, Vision.

I LOVE IT! xx
~P.G💋
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Hello P.G Thanks for the kind words and feedback.
  - Poetic Gawdess
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Always a pleasure dear. xx
Visions_of_Insanity
1 year, 3 months ago

Thanks Adira. Great to hear from you.
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 3 months ago

Powerfully penned, Keith. This one has grit, great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Appreciate the comments Damian. Thanks!!