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Read MoreDoesn’t pledge come before promise,And promise before reward?And before these must come the hintThe touch before the word.***In the cool of the evening as the long shadows fallWe walk closer in the fading lightYour hand first touchesThen slips in...
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Its the moments that lead to the exclamation point that give everything context. Live in the moment 🌼
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There’s a touch of apprehension and romantic expectation that happens I’m familiar with. It’s that little rush of excitement that brings a flush to the skin. You’ve seized on that to me with this poem in all your details. Very well done.
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Thank you. Romanticism is a dying art. Don’t know if I’m reviving it in the least, but I enjoy the effort.
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My sensual Joe,
your words, your words has me intensely yearning ❤️
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All long to feel as if we’re the consummate measure of desire. Yearning is good for the imagination.. What is imagined can be 🌼
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Read MoreThe ballroom music softly filled my head.And figures appeared before my hand.Classy gowns,upside down frowns. And fancy clothes all around.A ballroom dance,newfound romance.Is what my heart remembers and found. Once upon a December,I remember it well.I was going there,near my wishing...
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Read MoreI've always been a drifterfor as long as I can remember. I've never had the drive to chase dreams, and rarely even had any dreams to begin with. I never chased love, or a mortgage, or children. Somehow, I just...
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I have a collection of driftwood here with me. Because I couldn’t get over the beauty of something untethered just floating along, becoming weather & all the more beautiful for its age & travels. This one made me smile
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Thanks Willow…..we are all just drifting and how pleasant that would be if we allowed ourselves the time to realise it.
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Read MoreThe Hell within… was sparked by traumatic events. The Hell within my mind… was seared into my memory. The Hell within my heart… is the locomotive force of my writing. The Hell within… will remain as I refuse what was my heaven!
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I really appreciate that, Adira. I know I could comment more. Im just not much of an analyst lmao! Just a writer haha. Doesn’t mean I don’t read your work. Again, 😊 thanks!
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Amazing write, you’re a very authentic writer my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The dark side of the king of cups. I feel this in every pore, in the deepest recesses of my being. A powerful write! Your skill with free verse is admirable.