Hi,
Your lines so much logic and math words. Excellent English and rhythm flow.

You are great, i don’t know poetry can be so good with technical words.

Jessy Jacob ❤️

This is brilliant, my friend. The collision of mathematical or physical terms and the vivid and figurative imagery with many references hauntingly points to the difficulties to explain the inexplicable.

Quite often even the dark and distasteful thoughts must be laid bear. Maybe we’re under the impression no one cares, but people do relate. This is dark and disturbing. But life is too sometimes.

Powerfully penned, thoughtsdie. Amazing write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love this. Very powerful I can relate to this.
Thank you for sharing this.