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Read MoreI was carved from the oldest tree by strange things in the beginning ancient things that dance and spill blood The music was sharp and cut deep into my creation of stings...
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In the fourth season there is a character that plays the song from Metallica. So epic!!!! I put the link below in case you’re curious. I haven’t been writing the past year. I’ve been busy trying new things so your comment means the world.
Thanks for stopping by:)
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Wow this is dark. I remember the show. Nicely written.
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Hey Fia. Thank you!
I wrote this yesterday trying to find my mojo. lol
It’s been a while since I’ve sat down and written anything.
I’m going to post more often but it might be some older stuff from DUP.
Im still simmering on my other write about wildflowers.
Fingers crossed I will write something this weekend.Thanks for the support:)
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What! Of course you should’ve been made! All of my bad luck, you are my salvation!
You don’t write “dark” much. But obviously you can when it hits ya. The plethora of details within the write make it full, like a bag of candy when trick or treating. (That black cat I saw a few weeks ago was right outside my front door this evening!).
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Hahahaha. There’s your word plethora!! You crack me up up.
Me a good luck charm? I feel a pandora charm coming on hehehehe
And you can’t take it back. I’m still your salvation but you have to take me shopping for girl stuff!
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I was telling Glen, at work, about my boots you got me! He was asking about when is the hat happening. LOL. I told him I’m more a ball cap guy.
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Well Christmas is around the corner.
I might surprise you!
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Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write my friend, this one has darker tones. I dig it. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey there amigo. It’s the month of Halloween!
Now is the time for darker writes:)
I’m going to indulge in my dark side for a minute. lolThanks for the snaps on this write!
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Read Moreinside I crash into your energysmashing, cunted brillianceshining danger I can't resistinfidelity of the soulmy honesty is invaded by your darknessit seeps into my sorrowyour marred imageit makes me flinch what you call goodmiserable truth I hate the feelingof...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Love the depth and layers in this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian forgive my late response I find myself slipping of as of late ❤️
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Read MoreRoll you hair above your neck let me fortress centuries of love bites upon your skin, where no warrior would ever dare cross our moat The ghost of Caligula haunts my city walls, my heart remains legion; my mind is a bruise which only bleeds kindness, forever chasing...
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I like how the poem casts Caligula -a figure known for cruelty -into a haunting, reflective presence. I feel intrigued and a little unsettled: his brutal history seeps through with a mild, almost playful sadism, yet the poem channels that darkness into a tender, romantic meditation on desire, resilience, and the quiet power of love. Beautiful.
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An artistic and intriguing comment. I lived in the English city of Chester for some time and it’s steeped in Roman history,. Think it may have had some bearing on this scribble. Thank you.
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Passionately penned, Ghosteen. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you D
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Effective personal storytelling through historical abstractions. Your words are both sharp and tender. Always glad to see you posting here.
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Many thanks B
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Read MoreWord rubble and the corpses within I can no longer build temples from ruins Let me whisper snow from your hair massage the sun into your shoulders and back, turn every clock in this flat to interlude I care little that your past maybe...
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Cleverly penned, Ghosteen. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Many thanks D.
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I enjoyed the beginning trickles of affection.
Then the dam broke at the confession!
I grinned the whole time:)-
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Thanks for grin Adel. Appreciated
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There’s a beautiful tension here –between ruin and tenderness, poetry and flesh. It’s as if love is both the wreck and the rebuilding, the prayer and the profanity. “Poetry passport will only travel me so far” might be one of the truest lines I’ve read about desire’s limits. Beautifully penned, Rob!
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Many thanks Roma. Your interpretation of verse is so eloquent and elegant.
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I’ve honestly have only watched the first episode of Stranger Things. but your poem stands powerfully on its own. The imagery is so vivid and eerie, it feels like a story in itself.