I cannot imagine the pain and the dreams that come out of it.

Powerfully penned, Ghosteen. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

“When one was hurting silently
the other one knew loudly; ” – This is actually very clever and damn accurate. Props for that bit of genius.
The write itself is brutally honest and centered once for heart and once for the head. This is why I search your writes out, for the skill. Awesome write, Rob.

diolch H. when a kind soul such as yourself emotionally responds to my tatty words, it makes it worthwhile. eerie touched your heart, that is all we can ask in this trapeze and circus we call life. x

To find love but the old face is stuck in stasis of despair and anger. Nice one

Summarize me again, please, my friend!

If Hatred was a person it will hate this Haiku poem.
Well written bro! “)

The promising and positive title” sunny days ” creates an interesting contrast to the harsh and brutally realistic content of the poem. Very well written, dear Keith! xox

Thank you . Petter;)

Oh.. maybe I am submissive to him. (giggling) Thank you Crimsin

Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Now that’s a woman who knows her worth and isn’t afraid to state it and stand by it. There’s nothing weak about it, fierce is what this declaration is. But cleverly worded and leaving just enough to the imagination that he still has plenty of work to do.