ops sorry I already crossed the lake… you have to swim… as I said your poetry is always amazing

this is abosutely gorgeous lovely Fia this moved me greatly ❤️

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with some deep layers my friend. This gives me musing vibes.. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Oh wow…this one took me to a memory place. Amazing, Fia

I enjoyed this,Fia.

Chère L.,
What was it that Joni Mitchell sung?
We need to see from both sides now?
Something like that.

But then you give it a steaming twist.
Lovely! What a write!
Warm regards, Gus

Succulent and tasty!

Chère L.,
Back for an eye full of beauty.
And penthouse surrender!
Love it a lot.
Warm greetings, Gus

😊

We had to put on our glasses and reread, steamy

Oh my.. what a succulent poem.. mouthwatering.. and erotic!
Like always.. you’re words are extraordinary!
😍🤤

This form of poetry just takes you and pulls you into it. The subtly with the in-your-face parts are balanced nicely