WOW! This poem sizzles right before my eyes. I have a boat ready to sail. Let’s do this! xox

Oooo man that ending. That was good. I enjoyed how you took us into the contemplation of the act.

Some folks have all the fun but there is always a price to pay.
Great arrousing write.💋

Passionately penned, PG. Excellent write my friend your imagery is precise and alive. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère P.G.,
The boat is the cherry on the cake.
Love your write!
I’ll be back for an eyeful of beauty!
Kind regards, Gus

You can always create something steamy Lady, great imagery

Simple pleasures, and small feats. Great write Peter. xx

Beautifully penned, Peter. It’s the little things. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks Damian and PG….it’s a long day without a cup of tea, so get in early.No.matter what my mood a piping hot cuppa moves it for a while.
I guess so does bourbon but not at six on the morning.

Hoi hoi Peter,
That’s a qualitea poem. Hats off.
Love it a lot. Leave it up to me to murder your language.

If you are American: Thank you!
In all other cases: keep ‘em coming, please.

Kind regards, Gus

hope you will be soothed soon

That ache in the night is the worst.

Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write can feel the longing in your words my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This feels like the opening of a horror poem. Nicely done

powerful poem dearest James ❤️

Thanks for reading
Regards James

Thanks for reading.
There is a magic on the wind through trees and waves and grass
regards
james

Tragic, painful, sadness. This poem has so much hurt but brilliantly written Brenda. Great!

Powerfully penned, Brenda. This one tugs at the heartstrings my friend. I can feel the hurt in your words. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

With lost things can never be the same, but you can still move forward. Sad piece Lady