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    wander

    distant of thought, I try to come backpainful regret, I left at allseemingyly simple but I got lost in the mistsa forgetful soul wandering through the badlandsnothing but crows and mebits of flesh and marrowmy body up on a...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write really pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Home Cuming

                  “Call me LeVar Burton because I’ll read the rainbow of a dike ho Putting it to her creamy cunt real slow-so let it snow-let it snow,              “Spreading sweet thighs with a strong but firm grip Now I’m a front-face witness...

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    Chance

    They tell the tale of a cursed forest.Many walked in and never came back.The forest is dark,gloomy. And dogs warn and bark.The trees are tall and covered in leaves.Others not as much. And have dying leaves.They say,if you step in you...

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    Is This A Memoir? Entry 3

    Mom never discussed the loss of her first baby or the events of that day much after that, maybe once or twice she brought it up to me later in life. Matter of fact now that I think about...

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    • Powerfully penned, Anna. Heartfelt storytelling my friend that comes through in your writes. Authentic emotion from your words pulls at the heartstrings of the reader, in this instance myself. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you Damian, I appreciate all your kind words and taking time out to read.

    • just a quick note; Give some spacing (paragraphs) to this, please. It makes it much easier to follow for the reader.
      I am curious by nature about the human condition/s, so I’m following your story along. Some line breaks, etc, would really serve this well.

      • Im sorry, my mind is just burnt out, im just dumping baggage not giving thought to structure, ill try to apply your suggestions. Thank you for your kind instruction, help is nice, but if I end up writing the same way my apologies in advance. 😂

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