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    Distracted on the way to the scene

      You sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...

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    • You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.

      • Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.

        Thanks again for the kind feedback!

    • Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)

        Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.

    • Hot Erotica Star! xx

      • Thank you my friend!

        • You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx

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    the invitation

    tenderness vows to do no harmencourage a feeling and dance on the windssecretly craving your touchseduce the moment, I covetspeaking in tongues I whisper venomous versemeant to entice youmasochistic inclination, I think you like a commanding presencereverse the role,...

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    1970 Reverb

    My daughterMy mistressMy sanctuaryMy friendSingingTouch Me Babein the garage1970 reverbJust smoked a jointDad came homeunexpectedlyCaught meHard to explainthat odorSaid I soundedlike Morrisonthen and nowStill singin the showerHope she dropsthe soap

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    • Hoi hoi @Poetspeak,
      Hope this finds you well?!

      How recognisable! My parents didn’t mind. They feared nicotine more than the occasional joint.
      Maybe Amsterdam being the difference?

      Love your writes. Keep them coming please.
      Kind regards, Gus

    • Hi Gus

      Thanks for the street cred

      Hope all is well with you !

      Keep on Rocking

      PS

    • good morning dearest Poet looking good and I’m sure singing great ❤️

    • What a way to open. Love this piece;))

    • Oh fuckballs, missed you Sherrif.

      Love the vibe, the near-hippy feel and the captured moment of youth. This is a gorgeous momento.

      • Wow Betty

        Before your time but you know

        I love that

        Famous Morrison line

        “I woke up this morning and got me a beer”

    • Beautifully penned, Speak. Excellent write my friend. Morrison was one of a kind indeed. Odd fact, Robby Krieger the Guitarist actually wrote the lyrics to “Touch Me” among other Doors songs. He was like their secret weapon in a sense, Morrison did write the bulk of their lyrics though. This is why I love poems referencing music. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Not surprised with Kriger penning the songs. The dude carries it and he’s still out there gigging ..

        Thx Damien

        • Alive and gigging, maybe?
          I personality think that, as the number of stages seriously were lowered in Corona times, the grey tigers have the moral obligation to make room for the wild young musicians.

          Grey tigers includes me as a matter of fact.
          Kind regards, Gus

    • This is the PS we all know and respect. An artwork wouldn’t go amiss either!

    • I did have a picture of me in my underwear at that age.

      Maybe I should try to sell it with my used man boxers

      Thx Rob

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    a little filth

    necromancer of filthreanimating the long deadcorrupt of visionshudder in understandingmy sexuality reaps your honestyyour need on the windsencite my lusts, they are of a wicked naturecunted truths for this culted groupieyou called the four corners and the woman of...

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    tremble

    fear is its namedreaded unease is more than a feelingyou feel it deep within youyour stomach tightensand the dark enters ina sacred vow to be one of their legionin the darkness keep, mixing with the shadowsshowing no fear lest...

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