Bat Powers

Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

A Poisonous Drowning

Poetry

May 15, 2025

11

They were married for a very long timeMinimal love for one anotherBoth daydreamed about the perfect crime. A poor swimmer she was at bestHe thought of submerging her deepAn expeditious agonizing death. He enjoyed her cooking and anything she madeShe thought...

Read More

11 Comments
- M.E
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I have seen a slightly similar movie. I can’t remember which to put in the comment. Well penned!
  Working on the right plan. Haha
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks man. Appreciate the comments.
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  So, in the end, they took each other out. Irony.
  In the series called “Ozark”, something similar happened between a husband and wife. They were both plotting to kill each other. He took a knife on their walk, but the arsenic she dropped in his coffee got him first.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Never watched Ozark. Sounds lovely. Thanks Dampkitten
  - M.E
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    THANK You! I have been looking for where I have seen something similar. Ozark. What a good show!
    - DampKitten
      1 year, 4 months ago
      
      Yeah, Keith. You would totally appreciate the series, I guarantee it. Pretty captivating and intense.
- Poetic Gawdess
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Moooorral of the story?? Trust no one, not even your spouse. Noted lol once again, you’ve blown my mind. Great work xx
  ~P.G💋
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Don’t trust anyone. Not even yourself! Thanks P.G. You rock!!!!
    - Poetic Gawdess
      1 year, 4 months ago
      
      Means a lot coming from you xx
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Keith. A real match made in hell my friend. Great storytelling. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks man. Appreciate it.
Visions_of_Insanity changed their profile picture

• 1 year, 4 months ago
S. Libellule and blue are now friends

• 1 year, 4 months ago

S. Libellule
@dragonfly
blue wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Sad Clown Tears

Poetry

May 15, 2025

6

Sorry... I don't know how to cry How do they do it? Those who can How do they not look like death afterwards Or a sad clown portrait character during? My eyes are dry and hurt so much I don't remember the last time Where...

Read More

6 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  A gut-wrenching cry is therapeutic. Nice spill, Blue
  - blue
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Logically I know tears are healthy but crying is such a rare thing for me it feels foreign. Hopefully I figure it out.
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Fia is right. You need to just let go of your feelings.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Blue. Incredible spill my friend. The imagery and wordplay are fantastic. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - blue
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you so much. I appreciate you as well. I’m still figuring out the posting style of this website.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  A wonderful piece of poetry blue. Nicely executed.
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Forward

Poetry, Uncategorized

May 15, 2025

10

Deep with inA soundEscaped!Catching the airShock and aweCreated the first audienceForwardSymbols and representationsCaptured thoughtOn walls and clayForwardLife ripped from rootsFibrous parchmentCharcoal wordsKnowledgeForwardQuill and inkThin papyrusLines replace symbolsLoops entice the eyesForwardScreens and buttonsGreen and yellowFlashing cursiveForwardTexts, short formsMeanings misunderstoodNew vocabularyEver...

Read More

9 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Always move forward. Never in reverse. Cool poem Fia.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Right, never go backward. Thank you, Keith
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, Dragon-fire. I want to know what’s next.
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  This makes me want to chase down a Woolly Mammoth and scribble my initials on his testicles.
  “We didn’t start the fire!
  It was always burning
  since the world’s been turning!”
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Girl, you hit me up with Billy Joel? Love that song. Dk you know I am 4’11”? I will need an extension later to reach mammoth testicles. You are a little taller than me. You will have to climb on my shoulders. lol
    You are funny. Thank you, Dk., xoxo
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Fia. Love the flow and the imagery is stellar my friend. Nice spill. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you ☺️ appreciate that Damian
- Poetic Gawdess
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Fia, our world is ever evolving, but it’s refreshing to have you take us through time. Can’t wait to see what’ll come next. Brilliant piece my dear friend. xx
  ~P.G💋
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you P.G. Let us see what’s next
Load More Posts