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      Reunion

      ReunionBy FlatDaddy  OPEN: It is sometime in the early mid 1950’s in Waco, Texas. A little boy comes through the door of a garage to the dusty interior. There is something under his shirt. He goes to center stage where...

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      Dead Muse

      Dead MuseBy FlatDaddyMy baby's all black and blue and broken,  lying on the bed beneath me  inside me,Done in by ice  and eight years of morphine  that never ends the pain --  but dulls the mind  slays the will ...

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      • I feel the muse here is the dead one for eight years now.
        Painful loss…she is no longer inside him. Either she forced him into the drugs or he forced her out because of them.
        I think your poetry screams about the underside of life…the side many may not want to see because it mirrors them.
        The unwanted sides.
        This is really good, FD.
        j.

        • Thank you so much, J. All true, of course; however, in poetry, all readers can see only what they can interpret from their particular viewpoints, their own life experiences, and thus, their “interpretation” is valid only as possible truth, their truth — but actual truth can be diametrically opposite: The muse is the hero: eight years gone, killed by pain, and now, with the HELP of the morphine, is finally the resurrector. Then, of course, the morphine itself must be, and was, vanquished, and the man is back. For now, at least. In a situation like this, nothing is permanent. Try it from that viewpoint.

        • I already replied, but I keep getting a notification that takes me back to here. So I don’t know if you got what I replied last night, above this.

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      Rat Revelation

            There it was!There it was, right there in theAustin American Statesman,page E11, Sunday, April 9th, 1989:incontrovertible scientific proof!At first I thought it wasn't important,just another filler,relegated to deep burial on page E11 --and then the revelation swept...

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      • Now that is interesting. That tiny brain was in control all that time. So we have the same tiny brain and respond just the same way as a man would. Was that article in the Times? Nice read

        • See the 1st verse: Austin-American Statesman, April 9th, 1989. A real study. And boy, did I get a lot of flack from the “gentle sex.” Just reporting what I read — in my own words, of course. Isn’t that what good reporters do?

      • I was intrigued the whole time reading this.
        Informative and entertaining!
        With a side of “it wasn’t my fault”. Hahaha
        Enjoyed the read.

      • I’m glad you enjoyed it. It is a fun one to perform, though it’s been a good while since I have done that.

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