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Read MoreA Cryptic Sense of Doom Madness in the abyss of delusion yellow flashes of butts turn gray with haze of smoke rings scented mood candles veil the stench Absurd chatter, blabber, bird gossip episodic giggles over fanatic demeanor bodies ubiquitous oily touches, sweaty chairs, foxy floors empty whiskey...
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You painted a picture in perfect detail of places I once visited.
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You just nailed doom to this particular page .. enlightening all those passing through on the off chance and those intentionally visiting while simultaneously de-coding a significant percentage of what is left of mystery .. I’m glad I swung by this way Betty .. Warmly yours, Neville
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Such a sad tale. Addictions kill and pull people into the gutter only to die. Your poem encapsulates the experience as though Satan were in the room with them.
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Read MoreFirst light Dawn, pink The sun rises into an endless sky Shadows on the mountain range Like dancers on a stage Move in graceful patterns Daylight stretches Sun yawns and begins its sleep Slips behind the horizon Dusk is here, purple Moon smiles Shadow dancers Ink sky ablaze by distant stars...
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Great images in this Betty. Great poem.
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If you can shove aside the exhaustion, this is what it’s like to be awake for 24 hours. All times of day have their beauty and their enchantments. I truly believe you’ve captured the delights of the lark and the owl. Much enjoyed!
Clay
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Cool stuff Fia !
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Thank you, Styxian.;)) Hope you have been doing well.
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I caught a bad case of covid last week! It kicked my ass! It went through my work and got a few of us. I’m all better now!
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Oh man you had the summer vid. I had that 3 weeks ago. I’m glad you’re better.
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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How exciting!! I’m late to the post but the video put me right there with ya!
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Thank you Adel;))
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Interesting write. I found it quite intriguing.