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Read MoreFractured whispers in chaos haunting, feeding insanityechoing narcissistic guiseteetering on the edge like stones in a pocket falling into the abyssdrowning in pathology the silence of cacophony gazing in the mirror's facelost in self's ego embrace losing control in clock race...
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Read More𝒲𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝒻𝓇𝒶𝑔𝓇𝒶𝓃𝒸𝑒 𝑜𝒻 𝑔𝓊𝓃 𝓈𝓂𝑜𝓀𝑒 𝓂𝑜𝓃𝓀𝑒𝓎 𝒿𝓊𝓂𝓅𝑒𝒹 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒸𝑜𝓇𝓃𝑒𝓇 𝑜𝒻 𝒶 𝓃𝒶𝓇𝒸𝒾𝓈𝓈𝒾𝓈𝓉𝒾𝒸 𝓇𝒶𝒾𝓃𝒷𝑜𝓌𝒹𝓇𝑜𝓌𝓃𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒾𝓃 𝑜𝓌𝓃 𝓈𝒶𝓁𝒾𝓋𝒶 𝒻𝓊𝓁𝓁 𝑜𝒻 𝓁𝒾𝑒𝓈 𝓁𝑜𝓈𝓉 𝒾𝓃 𝓇𝑜𝒹𝑒𝑜 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝒻𝓇𝒶𝑔𝓇𝒶𝓃𝒸𝑒 𝑜𝒻 𝑔𝓊𝓃 𝓈𝓂𝑜𝓀𝑒
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Sounds like an agonizingly colorful death.
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Yes! I agree, let’s make sure those we love know how much we treasure them, while there is time.
Admittedly I struggled to read this through. The emotion is so incredibly palpable here, each word a pang of familiar grief.
If this is a personal loss for you – condolences , myfriend.
Clay
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hello Clay thank you it was my son of thirty six that is him in the picture I’m very sad that is the last statement to us all he is going to make please forgive me 💕
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Heartbreaking…
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thank you for being here dearest Keith 💕
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A thought shared by all for someone. 🌼
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thank you dearest Joe hugs 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A mother’s love is unconditional my friend. Truly am sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for the love 💕
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Read MoreYour body is limited by ropeEyes of fear, as your molested & gropedGo ahead, try it, you can't moveHeart pumping so fast, you do not approve He asks you if he can pound your assIt doesn't matter, as he rams...
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Gritty, raw, and darkly lit. A kind of almost macabre view of a horror scene. You write the dark with great dexterity, my friend. Truly well illustrated.
John
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Thank you my friend. Appreciate you
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Sounds like a horror movie to me my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love some gruesome horror. Thanks Damian.
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Some bodies are limited by hope…
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Thank you PAR.
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Read MoreCheckout at the marketThere she is21 years oldDropped out of high school at 16Baby in one armFive year old at her feetTwo different fathersThey both left as soon as they knew she was pregnantShe lives with her mom &...
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Powerfully written, highly realistic, and illuminating poem on some people’s lives. You wrote this so well, my friend. The ongoing tragedy is captured with vivid and clear storytelling that gives the reader a glimpse into what is going on with this woman through observations so clear that I can empathize with her. She seems to be a result of an upbringing that left her lost. And you illustrate this perfectly here.
John
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Tragedy & the dark. As you can see that’s what I love to write about. It comes easy for me to illustrate. Thank you John.
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It is a sad reality for most. But her priorities are fucked! Thank you my friend. Appreciate the feedback!
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Truth be told. Life is often cold.
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Thank you Joe.
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Another write that punches you in the gut. Well done!
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Thanks M.E. Appreciate the comment.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Priorities lead to choices, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s the truth. Appreciate the feedback.
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Priorities schmiorities… it is indeed a sad reality for many as Adira stated. But I mean come on??? I’d free bleed if it came down to feeding my kid, something’s gotta give here…
Also hope the POS who gave her the bruises got what he deserved..
Well done my friend, you’re amazing as always!
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Hello P.G Thanks so much for the read and comments. Sadly, this a reality for many in this country. xo
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You did a great job with this, dear Keith! You are a precise observer and fantastic and non judgmental storyteller who léaves it to the reader to make up their own mind. Concerning me, I pity the woman but at the same time I can’t understand that her baby isn’t her first priority. If possible, breastfeeding would be a wise idea to give the child a solid basis for a healthier life. Maybe, just maybe this baby could be the person to break the vicious crcle of violence, poverty and hopelessness.
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Hello Sappho. Options were there for this woman but she chose what mattered for herself, not the baby. You hope the kid has a brighter future, but the % of that is very slim. Thanks my friend.xo
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“struggling to feed the worm
baiting the Devil’s hook”
Wow, what a concept this is. Makes me think of that Stephen King movie called “Needful Things” where the whole town is doing the devil’s bidding. As always, you deliver a stirring collage of disturbing imagery!