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Thanks for the thoughtful comment Fia.
It’s not right and it’s not wrong , it’s just the way it is.Like everything in life,even suffering is impermanent.
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Quite moving..thank you for sharing
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I’ve often felt that pain is preferable to apathy. That quiet passing out of space. This haunts & hurts. So often the case, & always hard
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First the Technical: Excellent consistency with meter, beautifully executed rhyme.
Composition: Incredible depth. As Willow noted, the piece reflects a falling away, a loss of touch and intimacy with no explanation. It’s a death of sorts, and you’ve painted it perfectly. Really well done.
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Read MoreThe Mississippi Sex Terror rides again.Silver streak Rubiconmud-sling smilelate on the lease. I want a piece.That easy speaking crocodile,inches stretchfor miles at least.Piston pounding beast…Stick shift sentiment up my crease,pumping in the grease. Roll bar rough with a smooth release. How...
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This provoked a giggle or two!
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You know, I like to be provocative, Reggie. Thanks for reading!
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Cleverly penned, DK. Can’t go wrong sex and automotive speak. You’ll definitely attract the gear heads with this one. All you need is loud guitars screaming out the speakers. lol. Liked this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I wanted to pluck your strings, Damian. Now, give me that acoustic moan…
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Yeah, great flow! It feels like summer, wind playing with your hair and lots of weird thoughts on your mind! Great piece!
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It’s definitely a summer grind, girl. I have super weird thoughts. Thanks so much for reading!
xoxo
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Haha I loved this Meg! Flow especially. “Ball bearings deep” love it!
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Hey Daniel! I love to hear your favorite lines, ya know. Need a ride?
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Fuck yeah! 😉
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Slide on in
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E-mail me a ticket to Mississippi. If the woman look like that image down there, I’m sold! Great write Meg.
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You don’t need a ticket, baby. Just get in your jeep and drive down here. I’ll put on my shortest denims for you…
xoxo
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I don’t have a jeep! I guess I can steal one and drive out to you. My jeep & I will be quite dirty when I arrive. Do you mind if you give us a sudsy wash down wearing those short denims?
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I’ll wash you down after I take them off.
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Lemme at your Heme ….
Code for ass deepBIG STICK SHIFT …..LIKE
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Doors are open, Mr. Poet
Keys are in the ignition
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Tongue in your tailpipe…
xoxo
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Nick DC and
Visions_of_Insanity are now friends
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Read MoreI was just thinking that thinking is the root cause of all our suffering but please don't think about this or you'll suffer.You see thoughts are not thinking, are they?For example.Up ahead you see a person.That's the thought right...
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Thanks Indie for the thoughtful comment.
The human mind remains a mystery does it not?
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Killer piece my friend. A great poem to think about, especially if you sold your soul.
Question for you Damian…Did you sell your soul for Rock n Roll?-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No, I never went that far. lol. If I had and this was all the farther I got, then I would have got fucked on that deal. lol. I tend to complain sometimes, but this isn’t one of those times. Appreciate you.
Damian
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If ever there was a declaration for choosing your life wisely, this is it. We get one shot, make it count. And never sell out. I’d bookmark this if I could, so consider it bookmarked, my friend!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Honored to be a chapter in the book. Spot on in your interpretation. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sometimes I feel like I sleepwalk through life. Especially since I work a lot. Great ink.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you liked the write my friend. It can be hard when one is working a lot, but I’ve read your work, you’re wide awake to the sleepwalking I’m speaking of. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Okay, that is gut-wrenching. To lay there and live a slow death that you did not sign up for. Not right at all.
This is executed well