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Read MoreI miss youAlmost as much as I miss me***It’s hard to use the washed out meaninglessness of wordsTo try to fill the vacuum of numbThey lay dullLike old yellow paintWithout warmth and scarce able to fill their purposeFadedEverything seems...
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Hello dear friend. There once was a time, but I survived. The wound left a scar but I healed. This was written then and is just a memory now.. Thank you for reading and caring🌼
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This is packed with so much emotion. It’s as if I could feel what you’re feeling.
Keep moving, keep trying, don’t let anyone tell you you’re not worth it.
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Thank you. Love is breathtaking, even in its failure. It was once a.long walk in the dark but I awoke, and now I breath again.
I appreciate the counsel of kind words. its the simple truths that get us through.🌼
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Read MoreI walked among the quiet stems, where sunlight touched the earth's hidden gems, and found a bloom, so still, so shy beneath the vast unchanging sky. It spoke no word's, yet told me all of how winds through branches call,...
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That’s really nice, Fred. Love how you use rhyme and imagery.
I’m guessing you’re into ‘silence’ by virtue of your first three poems.One thing I might suggest is organizing your piece into more traditional stanzas that emphasize your rhyme scheme as opposed to presenting the poem in a classic prose format. You can even play with spacing as such.
This is a strong and thoughtful piece
Meg
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Thank you for the kind words and sound advice Meg.
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Nicely penned, Fred. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, greatly appreciated..
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Read MoreReal A dark ship on a dark night of soul Suddenly alight with Lights. Music starting to play Shadows beginning to sway Every soul having a Say. Vibrating into The skies. Everyone dies but But now everyone lives with daily rations of Passion. Breaking through ceilings with Thoughts & Feelings. To think to feel To be: Real ***Cipher Poems ***
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Beautifully penned, Cipher. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morethere is a place where the sea is still where the waves never speakwhere the sky pulls the light awayand all that remains is quieta wound that refuses to heali stood there onceeyes closed against the saltwaiting for something...
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This is sad, but you write so well. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you kindly Alexandria, glad you enjoyed it..
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I agree this is sad. Pulled on the emotions well
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Thank you Fia
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Powerfully penned, Fred. A heavy write my friend. Silence contains mysteries, as well as moments of clarity. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the words Damian, I truly appreciate the time you took to read all 3 of my scribbles my friend…
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hello dearest Joe love who you love and give yourself as fully as you can even if it’s just a friendship because being half there is no way to live trust me I know 💕