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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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Paula
This is a similar themed piece to one I’ve been trying to write for ages.You’ve done a great job asking question about the decisions we make.
We both know every action starts with a thought and that’s where the mind comes into play.If we’re fully awake and listening,our minds will see what the consequences of our actions will be.
I for one try to remember “no harm to any sentient being”, not always easy do.
I believe if a person’s intentions are good then, regardless of the law or societal norms, their actions are good.I’ve preached enough, when all I wanted to say was….great write.
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
OUR FIRST ’BACK TO POETRY BASICS’ SESSION:
“LEARNING & UNDERSTANDING THE ENGLISH SONNET”
by Richard W. Jenkins
© 22 Oct, 2025DETAILS OF THE ENGLISH [Shakespearean] SONNET
(taking notes for reference is a very good idea)A bit of interesting and awakening study is ahead, but it will be for this first time only in order to fami…Read More
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.