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Read MoreRhyymes over crimes verbs divide as knives plunged deep into keyboards, if God was drunk at the Last Supper the chalice fell from my mantlepiece Litte Miss Poetry came to my room wearing a red typewriter, did I really see a folded negligee on empty pages and would you have straddled me licking pearls from last...
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Powerfully penned, Ghosteen. Another excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moresinister eyes lurking everywherecapturing blackmail possibilities so far gone seeming not to carechaos breeds fragile sensitivities sleeping with the fear of normalcylusting for more than being humanhate spins big consuming a galaxythis sleeping giant collapses in ruin bending words into vile manifestos designed...
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“they distort sex, drugs, and even God” That is 100%. Good piece
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That they do, and sometimes it’s impossible to unsee it. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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I sometimes wonder if you realize in the writing how prophetic and on point your observations are. We had more than an inkling at the time of inking, but who could have predicted how awful it would get? And they’re not done yet. This is a beast of a powerhouse, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve been accused a couple of times in this life of being prophetic in my observations. J.J. Burton was the first to tell me that, even Joey G. has said it a time or two. I just go where my muse leads me, and jot down the thoughts that come to me. I think this one is more fuel for the bonfire my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Interesting in how such a write could be penned in the 1960s, til now. It’s a never ending cycle of promises and BS, with military interventions along the way. We the people just try to eek out a decent life, as unscathed as possible.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It could have been penned in the 60’s and every era in-between I agree. It’s a rabbit hole that never ends, a collection of puzzle pieces I try to put together, I’ve been chasing for answers my whole life. Sadly it often leads to more questions, because the actual puzzle is ginormous with lots of moving parts. It’s all part of my journey it would seem. My wife and kids are my happiness it only took a little over 20 years to figure that one out. lol. Better late than never I guess. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It would make great lyrics, you never know with me, it could end up going down that way. Appreciate you, brother.
Damian
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Some things just have to be said out loud and wrapped in poetry .. it’s too hard to write them in stone .. Nice one Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Very true, very true. Appreciate you, sir.
Damian
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Hey amigo. Everything is so unstable and messed up. I’m just trying to get through my day feeling like a decent person. It’s all too much. And I feel it in this write. Well done
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Ain’t that the truth. It sometimes feels like a horrible nightmare I can’t wake up from. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This reminds me of the book 1984. They’re changing history through numerous means and we’re all suffering under it. Good one, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does feel that way indeed. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI wrote this poem with no AI interference at all, nope none of that. The only thing AI did was help me get my poem onto this picture. That’s it. Thank you
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The Queen is a dark bad ass. Like the lay out and the rhyme scheme.
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Hello there Fia 🙂 thanks for stopping and thank you for commenting. i’m glad you enjoyed this piece
Thank you❤️
Jackie
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Hello Honoria,what a treat to see you here.
Like I was telling Crim it took me all night to write this poem. I’m pretty happy with the outcome. Thanks for looking, sweetheart.
Miss you
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Hello Damian.
Always a pleasure to see you on my page. I appreciate you too thank you my friend.
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Hi there vision, thank you. It means a lot and thank you for reading it and commenting. Appreciate you.
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Thank you very much Abby appreciate you.
Jackie xx
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
Diversity
Being a city boy
with Native roots,
I have always loved the feel
of cool, dew-laden grass
licking my toes;
the scent of pine needles
on the forest floor;
the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts
inside my heart,
I begin to see the balance of life.
We are, all of…Read More3 Comments-
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Very good…. I love this part the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts… A beautiful metaphor.. like if a butterfly can sense our thoughts . I do feel they sense those things too. Nice work… Keep it up-
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Thanks Navina, I am glad you found this poem enjoyable. It means a lot and I appreciate your comment
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Of course .. poetry is always good to read. My mind is always thinking so I write it down haha.
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Read MoreShe moves around with cautionNever knowing when "they" may appearParanoia has been setting inShe knows there realEveryone is telling her there notShe'll witness "them" from the corner of her left eye"They" look like little children whisperingAt times they'll look...
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Okay you know I am a scardy cat but this is good.
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Appreciate it Fia. Thank You!!
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Thanks for reading PAR.
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The twist and turns you have going here had me laughing and then my mouth was hanging open. Interesting piece