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You know this is quasi-brilliant. It’s like an updated bible of sorts. Not so much religious as it is of the human conditioning of limitations. Truly an outstanding piece of writing.
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Cleverly penned, PAR. This piece is brilliantly written my friend. Truly amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I loved how quirky this is. I kept wondering where the next passage would go.
And it does have a comic newborn superhero feel to it with all the attempts at flying.
Truly enjoyed
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great stuff, you two. Done just right. Plenty of descriptive moments to build the character into an active existence.
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This sounds like the person is torn up about being cheated on that they are lashing out at everyone. Its best to keep them away then to have them close so they do not hurt you. That’s what I see.