Love it,

Beautiful piece, full of imagery, you write like a friend of our. Believe us this is a very high compliment

Beautifully penned, Kay. Excellent write my friend with amazing storytelling and dazzling imagery. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hi K.,
Since 1964 (I believe), I have a flex disk, LP on the ESP’ label that comes to mind when I read your poem.

Poet Amiri Baraka is no stranger to controversy, and his work with avant-garde jazz band the New York Art Quartet (NYAQ) was no exception.

It was released under a nom de plume Leroy something, but in essence it was free style poetry against the pulsing ‘beat’ of free jazz.
This interaction worked remarkably well.
Perhaps I may suggest you do something like this (your poem against any type of music you prefer)?

Needless to say, I love this poem to bits.
Kind regards, Gus

This is absolutely lovely. A metaphysical bought down to a sublime earthiness
in one the most eloquent and lyrical excerpt of poetic musing I’ve haven’t experienced in a while
You did the damn thing

Much respect

Naaj

Love all of the unapologetic confidence in this! What a freaking write!
Loved it!

Beautiful use of Tam o’ Shanter. As always, your mind roams the deepest caverns without a lantern, and that final twist caught me way off guard

I worked on that for a couple of days.