This felt like a travelling within the mind and being trapped.
j.

Ok.

The plants get the therapy, while the speaker goes deeper into that technology pit of despair.
j.

I didn’t feel this until very recently, but now I do.
You stated my state of mind and heart here, Green.
j.

I’m hoping that’s true for me. Someday I’ll know for sure. 🙂

Short and sweet

We are always at the starting point of a new beginning, and that’s exactly where we’re meant to be 🌼

I used to ponder such things and wrestle with the all-too-powerful fate and the places and predicaments it put me in. Now in old age, I’m inclined to see it as you do.

Beautiful.

Beautifully said, Lisa. The bond between mother and daughter never fades if they’re both in good standing with each other. Welcome to the site. (Relic).

I agree, this is a beautiful sonnet.

Lovely work 🙏

Thank you so much Peter…
New to this site and finding it a big challenge to post exactly the way it is on my computer.
The image on my Awaken poem is to the left… but it should be centered.
Lisasview, now in Spain

A beautiful beginning, and I expect it shall continue so. Well done 🌼

This poem hits deep. Reminds me of my mother. Hard childhood, lots of pain…was always in her cupboard…she is free of that now.
thank you for this write, Lisa.
j.

Thank you so much for your thoughtful review Jacob,
Lisa

This is touching. I didn’t have the best relationship with my mother when she died, although it was improving. For that reason, I enjoy seeing how things should have been, and your lovely words do just that.

Thank you so much Sam for taking the time to review my very first dinner.
Lisasview

Beautifully penned, Lisa. Amazing write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you again for reading my poem and reviewing it.
Lisasview, now in Spain

Thank you so much SeaCat for taking the time to read my Sonnet and reviewing it.
Much appreciated,
Lisasview, now in Spain